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Gregory Adams Fiction's avatar

I got a kick out of this. I enjoy how you’re trying to do less in a story. Showing how the painted lines that establish where normalcy lies are pretty narrow and also they’re just painted on.

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Matthew J. Trask's avatar

Thank you, I really appreciate that and thanks for reading. I wanted to show how sinister something as simple as repeating the same question can feel in the right context. That and I find streets where all the houses look the same kind of creepy haha

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Saint-Lazare's avatar

Nothing more scary than religious people, good story!

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